Wednesday, 20 February 2013

Did You Ever by Zarne

Did You Ever

Did you ever…

Go to the Waitomo glow worm caves?

Glow worms glowing

Water drops dropping

Water flowing silently

Try it!

Did you ever…

Did you ever…

Go swimming at LIoyd Elsmore pools?

Children screaming

People diving

Kids swimming

You would love it!

By Zarne


  1. Wow Zarne

    that really cool I am going to ask my mum if I can go to Waitomo glow worm caves.

  2. Yes Zarne, I have been to Waitomo caves and Lloyds Elsmore pools an it's cool.

  3. Zarne, your poem is descriptive and original. Some children in Room 14 haven't been to the Waitomo Caves. How long does it take to travel there? You are a gifted poet.

    1. It takes about 3 or 4 hour to get there, but we stopped at a farm show, so it made it less boring.

  4. Julie (Zarne's Mum)2 March 2013 at 21:56

    That's a great poem Zarne and it was a great trip!

  5. great work Zarn.The poem makes me want to go to Waitomo caves